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overall, an impressively well executed story that perfectly builds on the world and characters established in facets.

if i'm to be a bit of a stickler (which i am),  i have to say that the action scenes felt a bit off (although the magic system was very well done), especially the final one that i felt dragged on for too long. i also felt that mana burning wasn't given nearly as much weight as it should have. and as much as i like the idea of the scene, the confrontation in chapter 27 felt a bit melodramatic. i wanted to like it but the dialogue just didn't resonate with me. 

but look, it obviously can't have been that bad seeing as i read the entire thing in one sitting, glued to my screen. for every little problem i just nitpicked, there were a couple of moments that i had to stop and take them in because they were just perfect. the sequence in chapters 22-25 was particularly striking and i'm definitely going to remember it for a long time. besides that, slow burn romance is my kryptonite and i found the setting and characters very interesting.

again, thank you for making this. you should be proud.

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Absolutely adored this. It totally stands on its own as a compelling story, but being paired with Facets just so highly elevates both works! For anyone reading who hasn’t read/played yet, I recommend playing Facets first. It gives Wayward such a special and potent framing. Super fun to see aspects of the game represented in a different format too!

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Loved it! The omnipresent lack of safety was really tangible throughout the forest and town. The glyph system being so specific for characters was fun, I like how Alyssa and Lacy's abilities intertwine (with nods to JRPG buffs. ) their playful banter was nice in between all the intense encounters. I could really feel the sense of entrapment Lacy had growing up ,  as well.

Enjoyed the character twist at the end,  felt like that really helped in giving a sense of all the people trapped within the guardianship, yet to escape. It was nice that she was able to forge new social bonds even after being dream dived .  And of course this all tying to Facets makes me wanna replay it to remember how things pan out.

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The slow burn romance is sweet, the action scenes are dope, and the character growth feels substantial and earned!  It's a pretty breezy read at only 120 pages, and a very smart extension of the game's lore.